To Weave a Spell of Seduction....

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

0 posted 2006-10-30 01:21 PM

I thread my loom
with all I know of you
  your thoughts
  your dreams
  your insecurities
Each thread spun taut
as piano wire
tensed and still..
waiting.

I lay the weaving threads
before me.
Measured action
for reaction...

Stimuli
to spark a resonse.
I pick the first one up
with ever-gentle fingers,
fingers that have waited
far too long to tremble,
...as if nervous.

And carefully, so full of care
the task begins.
A glance ~
A blush ~
A smile and fleeting touch.
Each thread, as if a spider's
beckons to you...
catches you...
and draws you near.

I'm weaving a spell of seduction,
As my fingers draw each thread
  through crimson chords
I think of you...
And whisper prayers of passion
to a faithful Deity.
But instinct dictates pattern.
Experience, the style.

You'll never even recognize
     the multicoloured cloth I weave,
          but when my scissors snip the final thread...

then you are mine.

.

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

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Michigan, USA

1 posted 2006-10-30 01:23 PM

OUTSTANDING!!

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2006-10-30 01:35 PM

congratulations sweet lady, on this amazing milestone. Loved the spell you cast with this Nancy! Hugs.

writergrl
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since 2006-10-30

Posts 73
Las Vegas, Nevada

3 posted 2006-10-30 01:46 PM

such beauty and style does this piece evoke...your use of rich metaphor is outstanding...lovely! Brava!

write on,
writergrl

Deep_Inside
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since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

4 posted 2006-10-30 02:10 PM

This piece was awesome, the metaphors that you've used flow together so nicely. I was able to be put directly into “your” place as this as I read each word, thank you.

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2006-10-30 02:34 PM

seductive cocoon
enchanting weave of allure
lovely cosseting

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

skyshine

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since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

6 posted 2006-10-30 03:07 PM

This is beautiful, Nancy....and congrats on the new milestone!

sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2006-10-30 06:07 PM

Excellent write Teed !!
Congrats once again on this milestone.
hugs & miss ya!

"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." - Oscar Wilde

Martie

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8 posted 2006-10-30 08:59 PM

Nancy...You capture your reader with words every time. Congrats to you and a thank you!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

9 posted 2006-10-30 09:57 PM

Congratulations!

PEBBLES
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since 2006-10-30

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South Australia, Australia

10 posted 2006-10-31 12:21 PM

So enjoyed this.Fell under your spell. Well done.

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

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The Southwest

11 posted 2006-10-31 12:29 PM

captivating Nancy!

Congratulations!

AltairVonCreed
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since 2006-10-16

Posts 14
Nephi, Utah.

12 posted 2006-10-31 01:06 AM

Simply catching, was definatly worth the read. Loved every bit of it.

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

13 posted 2006-10-31 08:42 AM

Wonderful spun weave of words. So much passion. Weave me a spell Tinker!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

14 posted 2006-10-31 08:59 AM

Only an Enchantress could write this, but the magic is real! loved this, Nancy!

~ Karen

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

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West Coast

15 posted 2006-10-31 09:13 AM

lady E..bad girl bad bad girl...nice work

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

16 posted 2006-10-31 09:18 AM

Enchantress~
With each read ... I was drawn tighter and tighter into the web~

Grand and glorious, dear lady~

You reminded me of something I 'may' try to repost~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

Waterfall27
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since 2005-06-24

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Ontario , Canada

17 posted 2006-10-31 09:43 AM

Congratulations!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

18 posted 2006-10-31 12:10 PM

~Thank you all for your most generous replies!~

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

19 posted 2006-11-02 07:54 AM

wonderful web you weave here Nancy - it filled my mind and heart with wonderful images - Paul

CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

20 posted 2006-11-02 09:46 AM

The poem, as the woven cloth, draws in

till the final

snip

So, that's how it's done? Now I know, what that flash was.....LOL

Nicely done, Enchantress.

CG

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

21 posted 2006-11-02 09:54 AM

Nancy, this is brilliant! ~ and no one can weave a spell of seduction with words better than you, m'dear! ~ or otherwise, no doubt!

This is a

to be sure!!!

You truly are The Enchantress!

Linda

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