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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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You You are a part of what exists Of earth of sun of mind and mist Chaos and our thoughts sublime And will be till the end of time Shape and form is a part of it And dream and wile fit into it Its chaos makes the void exist And sense that makes the light to twist Some label it the grand scheme I say it is the grand dream Drawn into what ever may be It is to me the grand we I live in awe within its core Accept the chaos change of store What was before what is to come? The beating of the drum the sum For in the sum there is but one And that will be until its done |
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Mr. Omniscient Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 134 |
Very nice Seymour... I enjoyed reading it.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I've always liked the thought of the grand scheme but now I like the grand dream even more! Good morning Sy what a nice gifting before I am off to work |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Good morning,Sy! What a nice wakeup poem. Have a grand day!  ...jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mr. Omniscient Enjoyed your read and comment. passing, Have a wonderful day.  iliana, Thank you and may yours be just as grand. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What a beautiful poem to read on this sunny autumnal day! Hope yours is a good one Sy!  ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
The sum-total is a 1derful read, Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Enjoy the day.  Interloper Enjoyed your comment. Thank you |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
now that's a grand thought Sir Sy "the grand we" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady I thought You would like it. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! I'd say that in the grand scheme of things, you, yourself, are an integral part of earth of sun of mind and mist! I enjoyed your thoughts sublime! Never stop dreaming! He smiles at your radiance! ~ as do I.  God's Loving Light ~ 'n a whole lotta angel hugs 'n kisses, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Can't ask for more than your giving. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
LIKE BEING JUSTIFIED AND ANCIENT~ sweet sy,always an honor to read you~ My spirit will rise above the sea~ There will be no drowning of my soul or me~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES Exactly. |
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