Open Poetry #39 |
Moonlight Beach |
sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Moonlight Beach An old man sits a-rocking; people think he’s quite insane Across his lap is a blanket, beside him lies his cane He doesn’t hear their laughter, his thoughts they cannot breach For in his mind he’s traveling to a place called moonlight beach It’s there his thoughts have taken him across the many miles Where he once held his lover with her warm and gentle smiles Her memories bring comfort to the old man in the chair And he can see her soft white skin and flowing silken hair He dances with his lady love and softly takes her hand And they stroll along together across the soft white sand She comes to him at twilight ‘cross the water dark and deep And gently takes his frail hand as he softly falls asleep The old man passed away last night, a smile upon his face He’s not confined within a chair; he’s left that dreary place He’s young again and dancing and she’s within his reach And they are holding hands again, alone, on moonlight beach |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, Steve...I like poems like this... I have one or two of them myself, back in the archives, but my meter is not nearly as good as yours... I keep trying, however, to make them sing like yours... thank you for this! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a touching piece! |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Steve, This is beautiful -- so very beautiful. Alison |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wow, this poem sings. The metre is perfect and the memory superb. cheers Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
enjoyed this very much |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Most excellent write Stephen. Amazing piece of work. You have great talent. No spring, nor summer beauty |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
sewasham From your pen to Gods eye. Enjoyed |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
My thanks to you all for the kind words. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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