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Open Poetry #39

White Light

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2006-10-29 05:39 PM

As Always, thanks to all those who read my poems and reply so warmly and to all those who have given me advice..thanks!

here we go,

White Light

white light
shows me the way
to the door
i have to knock
guess i'll soon find out
if it's the door to heaven
or if it's the door to hell

white light
shows me the way
many questions
with no answers
suddenly appear

white light
has come for me
to take me out
i just hope you will be alright

white light
shows me memories
of my life
and then everything comes to an end
peace, freedom
all i ever wished
is now at hand

but i don't see you
i'm already missing you
but i know
someday we will meet again

Mr. Omniscient
Member

since 2006-10-28

Posts 134

1 posted 2006-10-29 08:21 PM

I liked it... Nice work!

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