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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2006-10-29 01:21 PM

It was you that brought the summer breeze
Through a worn wooden door covered by
Black screen and swatted flies.  A door that
Moaned and shrieked,  squawked and squeaked.

I remember too well that door,  as my hand
Brushed your own and your eyes looked
Tauntingly over our shoulders while your
perfume Beckoned and swirled behind me as the
Latch gently clicked and a hidden sigh
Missed a delicate ear.

And as the hours fell into the hourglass,  saying
Adieu…it was you that brought the chill of
Night into a room filled with dancing flickers
And quiet snickers….and oh,  how I remember
Your eyes as they gently closed and Autumn
Leaves fell carelessly onto a field of white
Cotton as the rise and fall of our breath
Froze our eyes as we awaited the silenced
fall of newborn snows…

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2006-10-29 02:07 PM

Barry,
Elegant, enjoyed.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2006-10-29 02:09 PM

My favorite kind of imagery, left your eyes, and drifted on this page for me to read.
TD

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2006-10-29 04:21 PM

Oh, my, another Magnus selection for my library! Beautiful. hugs, Chris

"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." - Oscar Wilde

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2006-10-29 04:38 PM

Barry...you married the emotion to the imagery so darn well....great write!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2006-10-29 09:03 PM

"I remember too well that door, as my hand
Brushed your own and your eyes looked
Tauntingly over our shoulders while your
perfume Beckoned and swirled behind me as the
Latch gently clicked and a hidden sigh
Missed a delicate ear."

You bring the blush to my cheeks Barry.
And the WS beckoned and swirled behind you?

Beautiful piece of writing...more please?

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2006-10-29 09:10 PM

lovely and so romantic Barry
I love that screen door...

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2006-11-17 02:38 PM

You must surely have a romantic heart to pour such perfection from your pen. *S*

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