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Death-dive (into the deep end)
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Death-dive (into the deep end) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Bring to me the salt of sea proof that stars weep and the skies have eyes that watch us hypnotized just like we watch on CNN statues veined in marble, when things we thought unthinkable are played for us and angles bend the truth in snide reality spun to cut to sponsor timed adjusting our capacity indulgence rectified to fit our limited digestive wits controlled by all the silences annoyed by nodding anchorman pretending that he understands just before he speaks the lies verbatim (thoughts of "otherwise") too shallow for a tranquilized death-dive into the deep end of the greenscreen screaming "THEM" and all our enemies are spooled alphabetically and I am weeping tears into a pool wondering perplexity if I'm a God or I'm a Fool waging waves and salts of me damning galaxies to this: I wish I never thought of it for thinking, surely, made it so. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I can only give you a hug and say though I am not in your shoes...I understand your words.  M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hey K, I'm lovin' travellin' lately so I have half a mind to jump in my car and take a ride up there to cheer you up a bit or we can just have a good cry together  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, Thinking is a diamonds ore Cool it and we see its awe.   |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Wow, Ser. This is an amazing piece. My mama always told me not to think or say some things or I would make it happen. You are not a god btw....you are a goddess! ....jo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
There is nothing we can't think of, surprising ourselves at times. It's difficult not to indulge in depressing thoughts when watching certain things ... But you have created a powerful poem, activating a process of liberation. You are no doubt a goddess (I do believe we are all of Divine Nature) and being aware of this helps to bring along a change. Love, Margherita |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I am still trying to think of something to say. But I thought you would let you know that I am amazed. <3 |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done! Watch what you speak into reality, though, unless it is that you won the lottery  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sigh I don't wanna be a god. So I think I'll just stay a fool.  Thanks all for reading. This was inspired by staring at my big toe. (Seriously) I noticed I needed to trim my nail, and was thinking I was about to slough off a whole crescent of an inner universe... (serenity taps her head <--somedays it's a happy place in there...)  thanks all |
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