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Michelle's Dayscape
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Michelle's Dayscape |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Michelle’s Dayscape  It goes without saying, little one that at the piano I felt your spirit feeling you were some fire’s birth in your mother’s womb this, I could recognize because my very own babe shares the month of your birth strange, I hadn’t thought of that before, but in the fire of your month, when Opal carries in white the color of your emotions and emotions blazon ‘cross shadows where memories show of images and man and wife are holding you, child, it goes without saying that love crosses time when even moments are without end, some sheen of wander comes on wings, when shifting winds sound like love, and there is love held tight, again it is then, I see you, smiling. © Karilea Rilling Jungel In memory of Michelle 10-28-06 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 very special, this and you |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful Karilea. hugs, Chris "Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." - Oscar Wilde |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Very beautiful. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear sissie....I don't have the right words, so I hope you just know how touched I am by this....I know Michelle is too.  |
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Mr. Omniscient Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 134 |
Very Nice! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'm torn between a yearning here-- I'd love to see this more primally depicted, but I understand the necessity of tempering... and this's why I cannot wear Opals: "but in the fire of your month, when Opal carries in white the color of your emotions" It is a lively stone and full of fire and liquid light, and wearing them seems to amplify what is already far too apparent in me. This poem is gently lovely--but I swear I felt some restraint as if almost fearful of evocation of the underlying tsunami, yanno? Sure you do. You both know.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"it goes without saying that love crosses time when even moments are without end, some sheen of wander comes on wings, when shifting winds sound like love, and there is love held tight, again it is then, I see you, smiling." Most beautiful and endearing Karilea. Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
fragile and heart written a lovely gift Karilea |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Karilea, this is absolutely beautiful. |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
beautiful.......absolutely perfect gift of love |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
As only you can write... Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
As always I really enjoyed this. I would have liked to have more to read, thanks |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Your heart is so ever giving Mommak. And you? Are so very beautiful, as is this stellar write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I cannot think of a more precious sharing. Just lovely, SIL. ....jo |
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amberhues Member
since 2006-11-01
Posts 93 |
This is a beautiful sharing of heart! |
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