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Beyond the Wall |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Repost: Beyond the Wall I see the past in ghostly dye It sweeps before my inner eye It waves to me in phantom play And says what would you have me say? It offers me a grail of drink The fluid of a moments think A fantasy a realm of seem Not quite real yet not quite dream It plays upon the heart of me And steeps me like exotic tea Euphoria the nectars taste Since ecstasy was its base I float away into the sky To touch upon those things of sigh And happiness brings hidden joy Like a child with new found toy It is a place within us all It’s just beyond the doubter’s wall |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Seymour, how exquisite! I think we can all relate to these feelings, you rendered them masterfully. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita Thank you, enjoyed your sweet comment. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
It plays upon the heart of me And steeps me like exotic tea Euphoria the nectars taste Since ecstasy was its base A "dream" of a write dear Seymour. much enjoyed. hugs, Chris "Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." - Oscar Wilde |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, A dream of a reply, thank you. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy....Beyond the wall...I think maybe I'll go there today.  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What Chris said, 'cuz I couldn't say it any better. Fabulous write, Sy! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie When you get back tell me what you found. Interloper, That's good enough for me. Thank you |
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PoetrySinger Member
since 2006-10-16
Posts 54 |
its a turn on to see a poet who's go this thing but yet don't know it your poem shows it keep on writing and all your poem friends shall stay so warm and inviting |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
PoetrySinger Enjoyed your reply, thank you. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I'm off to the place beyond the doubter’s wall Sir Sy! thanks for the ticket |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady It is also a return ticket. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Fall sure seems to bring out the child in us, Sy. Spring grows green, but autumn presents itself and the past in golden and crimson edges to dance through those hugs of the heart. I always love yours. Karen  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Klassy, You are more than klassy. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I float away into the sky To touch upon those things of sigh just yesterday I was saying..."take me away, Calgon...."  M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Thank you sweety for the read and comment. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a place within us all *sigh* so wonderful! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Thank you sweety. |
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