Open Poetry #39 |
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Cheek To Glass |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989![]() |
When rest comes to you in the calm of your night, while you slumber it is I that presses cheek to glass cooling the sting of fear, settling in to reside inside seeming like a stranger to me; this feeling of uncertainty so much that although soft drops of rain fall against my window pain is not soothed, no usual feeling is brought of peace my tears fall and I am lost in wondering if your heart can hear the sounds of my soul remembering our dance. seek the flame within yourself and let your soul be cleansed by the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-26-2006 09:57 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so sadly beautiful...this touches |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"my tears fall and I am lost in wondering if you heart can hear the sounds of my soul remembering our dance." Such a melancholy write~yet lovely in it's sadness. Hugs~Nancy Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna, you truly do have a "Gentle Spirit"... Your words whisper wistfulness, yet ever so beautifully. Loving hug, Linda |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautifully, sadly wonderful. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
heartrending tender yet beautiful indeed gentle Donna |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (angel comfort hugs) Oh Donna, this is indeed sad, and I can understand the anxiety of leaning your cheek against a dirty window pane when it's raining and though you can see the dewdrops ever so well, you're not quite sure you can feel or identify with whose tears they are, and it can make a confused, grieving heart all the more confused! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a beautifully emotive write, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" Mother Teresa |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Seriously though...I loved the last stanza of this..... ![]() "My soul is adrift in oceans of madness |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Supremely beautiful. Especially loved the last bit. I'm keeping. "Hey, it's me, I'm dynamite and I don't know why" -- Van Morrison, 'Sweet Thing' |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
Be Au Ti Ful Wish I could read this again anew. What a gem of a write. ~ Cheye |
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