Open Poetry #39 |
Illumination |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This morning when sleepy eyes opened and first glance was caught, you were not there to add the usual charm of enlightenment; heavy was the fog covering that special place where sun and moon collide like lovers walking hand in hand under new day skies but in the distance I saw shimmering glimpses of you arriving in your chariots of gold with smile flashing bright illuminating, today. [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-27-2006 08:49 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, this is truly lovely, dear Donna! Indeed the Light is always there, even if hidden. Beautiful illumination! Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I feel sorry for those who "sleep in" and miss the majesty of such delights... beautiful imagery...as if I were there... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ode to a beautiful day.. A 1derful piece Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit A delight to read. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(does happy dance) Awwwwwwww, this is wonderfully hopeful and romantic, sweet friend, and may that smile truly find its way into your heart and take you away on velveteen dreamscape fields white as snow, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful....James |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!! how could one not cheer to read thsi |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
you've drawn a burnished dawn here gentle Donna have a lovely night... sweet lady (I miss your countenance) |
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