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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2006-10-26 05:35 PM

Treats

Often, in discussion with the moonlight
I uncover places previously missed at twilight
Messages upon the plump of acorns, near November
Carved, abbreviated notes in the bark of autumn ember
Delight that speaks poetry in scents of gold and green
Voices escalate along trails where I have never been
Anticipation sits ready for the frosting of quiet time
Crunching through the leaves that dried still on the vine
Red, the berries of a trump card bush, chain mail for morning
Anticipation
Never, at the boundless woodland pallet, have I been lost
Not for time, or imagination, or for another Tee uncrossed
For paradise is found within, hospitable and welcomed ways
Surprise awaits the eyes that see between Evergreen sways
As body language fingerprints forgiveness on the air
Filtering it’s clearing comb throughout soft gold of flaxen hair
I am free of longing what is not to be, left with simple ought to be
Often, in discussion with the moonlight
I uncover places previously missed at twilight

Copyright Kkh 10/26/06

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2006-10-27 06:10 AM

Anticipation sits ready for the frosting of quiet time

my sentiments, exactly!
enjoyed your thoughts this early morning

M

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2006-10-27 11:17 AM

quote:
Surprise awaits the eyes that see between Evergreen sways
As body language fingerprints forgiveness on the air
Filtering it’s clearing comb throughout soft gold of flaxen hair
I am free of longing what is not to be, left with simple ought to be

A deep pleasure to read, dear TD!

Magic flows through your pen.

Love,
Margherita

PoetrySinger
Member

since 2006-10-16

Posts 54

3 posted 2006-10-27 01:24 PM

Love it keep those poems coming for I will cry if you give up your gift. nice try

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

4 posted 2006-10-31 10:13 AM

I really like this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

JLHunter
Senior Member

since 2006-10-08

Posts 557
CA United States

5 posted 2006-10-31 10:29 AM

Hi, TD.

That is a soft, sweet, loving ode to nature and life.

Well done.

John

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2006-10-31 12:06 PM

What a treat!
I love it

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2006-10-31 12:13 PM

Beautiful Kathleen..like an autumnal walk in the woods.
Hugs~Nancy

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

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