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0 posted 2006-10-26 03:29 PM





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nature sheds her gems
soft earth her jewelry box
bright autumn treasure
bounty free for our taking
crisp seasonal adornments


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Chris Barker
October 2006
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© Copyright 2006 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-10-26 03:59 PM


It is amazing, isn't it Chris?  All of what
she gives to us each year....no matter the
season, there is always beauty around us,
all we have to do is look.

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2 posted 2006-10-26 04:19 PM


CHRIS!!
Is it really you?  
You're back and look at this beauty!!
We've all missed reading your magical words.
~Hugs & Love, Teed~

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

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3 posted 2006-10-26 04:54 PM


Yes, Magnus, if we just open our eyes ... what a blessing each season brings. thankyou for reading and  commenting.

Hi Teed !!!  Wait....let me look...yes, it's me...lol. Thanks, hugs & Miss Ya!!

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4 posted 2006-10-26 05:31 PM




(does happy glissade across Mother Nature's jewelry box) Yay! Oh Chris, I have missed your gorgeous poems ever so much, dearest friend, as always your poems gleam with much enthusiasm and colorful imagery, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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5 posted 2006-10-26 05:45 PM


Enjoyed...James
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6 posted 2006-10-26 06:05 PM


Yay !!! Chris joins in happy dance with Noah. Thankyou my friend !!

Many thanks James.

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7 posted 2006-10-26 07:11 PM


Chris~

She said, "I tried a Tanka of sorts."

And SUCCEED is what you did, lady~

Chris, this is gorgeous ... I am tickled in shades of 'autumn' to see this 'jewel'~

Hey, now ... don't go feeling any pressure or anything ... but, um, I'm thinking (and Lord knows that is sometimes a big mistake) that a Rictameter is next of your list of 'I trieds' ... right ?

Love you sweets~

Thursday-In-October *HUGLETS*
~*Marge*~


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8 posted 2006-10-26 07:54 PM


In just a few words you've painted a great Autumn joy!!!! Kudos! Love and peace, Maggie ((~.~))


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9 posted 2006-10-26 08:05 PM


Oh Chris, I love this beautiful tanka. Autumn is my favorite time of the year. I love to see the different colored leaves.
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10 posted 2006-10-26 08:41 PM


Marge dearheart ~ thankyou for the little nudge and hugs for your comments.

Maggie - thankyou for reading and commenting

Hi Sue! Many thanks and yes, I love autumn too!

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11 posted 2006-10-26 08:50 PM


Nightshade:  I so enjoyed this beautiful picture and the equally lovely poem. Thanks for posting it.

Betty Lou

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12 posted 2006-10-26 08:58 PM


Thankyou so much Betty Lou. hugs!
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13 posted 2006-10-26 10:06 PM




a delightful autumn poem
and a beautiful picture

I enjoyed both

Kate


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14 posted 2006-10-26 10:26 PM


Thankyou very much Kate.

"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." - Oscar Wilde

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15 posted 2006-10-26 10:29 PM


What a joy to read such beautiful words!

Patricia

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For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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16 posted 2006-10-26 10:31 PM


This is beautifully written Tanka. Your imagery was masterfully done. A wonderful job. Take care and Have fun. Steve


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17 posted 2006-10-26 10:38 PM


Thanks to you both Patricia & Steve.
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18 posted 2006-10-26 11:16 PM


This is truly very lovely. I've not tried a tanka,  but you have inspired me to try it. I am afraid I will not be able to paint as lovely a view, but try I will.
Thank you for the lovely image.

Sandra

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19 posted 2006-10-26 11:50 PM


Sandra, I am thrilled that my small offering has inspired you. You will do a fine job I am sure. Thankyou.
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20 posted 2006-10-27 12:36 PM


Hi Nightshade,

where did you get those gems...

Your words speak for their wondorous presence, often went unnoticed.

greatly enjoyed.

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21 posted 2006-10-27 01:47 AM


what a pleasant surprise to find you here while roaming the pages tonight!!

You've been missed!

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quote:
nature sheds her gems
soft earth her jewelry box
bright autumn treasure
bounty free for our taking
crisp seasonal adornments



Absolutely enchanting, dear Chris! I have no familiarity with tanka, but who knows one day I might try ...

You inspire!

Love and hugs.
Margherita


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23 posted 2006-10-27 10:16 AM


~ thankyou all so much ~
Your comments are deeply appreciated

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24 posted 2006-10-27 10:58 AM


Hi Chris...I am so glad to see you here...you've been missed.  Love the poem and photo!!!!  
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The best adornment is YOU,
here on the blue pages

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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...and she's back, in all her glory...

and I'm not just talking about Fall.

Welcome home again, Chris...




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27 posted 2006-10-27 12:09 PM


Martie, Interloper & Karilea ... you all have been missed as well. Thankyou so much for reading and commenting. Hugs!
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28 posted 2006-10-27 02:32 PM


gorgeous write and photo
I love fall colors, the warmth they offer

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29 posted 2006-10-27 04:32 PM


Chris your words perfectly describe autumn .
Betty

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30 posted 2006-10-27 05:15 PM


Thankyou so much Kacy & Betty.
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31 posted 2006-10-28 12:02 PM


A real beauty!  I love these fall colors pictured and the well chosen words  enhansing them.

God bless,
   Rae

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32 posted 2006-10-28 12:34 PM


Thankyou so much Rae. hugs!!
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33 posted 2006-10-28 10:44 AM


What beautiful words greet me this fine fall morning

I am nothing special...and my name will soon be forgotten,but I've loved another with all my heart and soul,and to me,this has always been enough.~N.S

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34 posted 2006-10-30 02:37 AM


Hi ChrisLane!!
What a beautiful poem about my favorite
time of year. Love it.
Hugs,
Ethel

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35 posted 2006-10-30 03:02 PM


Chris--thank YOU for sharing this treasure of nature with us!

sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

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36 posted 2006-10-30 06:01 PM


Many thanks poets three!!
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37 posted 2006-11-01 01:22 PM


Beautiful combination.It sent me to your web site and that was such a pleasure. Great to meet you there with your friend. martyjo  
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38 posted 2006-11-01 01:56 PM


martyjo - thankyou so much. I am thrilled as will be my friend in Arkansas, Darce Jean, to hear that you enjoyed our website.
hugs!

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39 posted 2006-11-08 01:55 PM



I came back for a look at these pristine jewels of autumn~

~Rapturous inking
Splashes from well of thinking
Staining the pages
With vivid colors of fall
Poetess of word palette~


Would a Wednesday-in-November
be just special enough to get you to spill some more ink ???
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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40 posted 2016-09-05 01:18 AM


Well its getting to be autumn here...summer is definitely winding down. Glad to have found this!
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