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Open Poetry #39

Fearful Reactions

XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

0 posted 2006-09-07 12:49 PM

A bird on a branch
Near the tree top.
Wind started blowing
and he feared he'd drop.
He looked down at the ground
and it gave him a fright.
So he took to the sky
To escape the height.

The frog and the turtle
Sitting on a log
It began to rain
on the turtle and frog.
Their minds got disturbed
They started to fret
And jumped in the pond,
so they wouldn't get wet.

Jane loved Bobby
and Bob loved Jane
But Jane couldn't bare
anymore pain.
Giving her heart
made her scared.
It only got broken,
everytime she dared.
So she pulled back
and pushed him away.
Lived all alone
'til her dying day.
Cried day and night
'til they laid her in the dirt.
Wrapped in sorrow,
so she wouldn't get hurt.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2006-09-07 12:55 PM

This is so sad, but yet can very much relate to Jane's feelings in this.

So nicely done Larry, I do so enjoy your poetry.

XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

2 posted 2006-09-07 01:04 PM

Thank you so much for reading and replying.
I am glad you like my writings.
Thank you soooo much for calling what I write "poetry". Coming from you...that is quite a compliment. I will be able to glow from that for several days. ::smiles::
(((Gentle Spirit)))

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-09-07 04:33 PM

"Cried day and night
'til they laid her in the dirt.
Wrapped in sorrow,
so she wouldn't get hurt."

wonderful as usual Uriah...

BloodyEclipse
Junior Member

since 2006-09-07

Posts 16

4 posted 2006-09-07 04:45 PM

Stupid Woman...
As for the man...
He did nothing and what does that say?
Was it even worth the tears?

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