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Putty in Your Hands
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Putty in Your Hands |
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arwen54 Junior Member
since 2006-09-07
Posts 13Welland, Ontario |
I should have known it - how could I tell There'd be someone else as well - Not just me, your friend with the smile Who would rescue you from the darkness once in a while When you might have felt the need. You planted the very first seed Of my burning desire And I let myself get mesmerized by your fire. I was like putty in your hands... Oh, I remember those artist's hands - They caressed and they teased And they liked to please - And they did. And you did. ©1995-2006 Karen Blundell(aka arwen54) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS KAREN! A most beautiful entrance piece you have presented us with. I see you are from Ontario also.. you will find quite a few of us are also. Looking forward to reading more of your work. I know you will enjoy your stay here at Passions. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy-in Ontario~ Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Welcome Karen. Very nice indeed. I really enjoyed this Now I'll have to check out how to enter your contest Thanks Rich |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karen~ Welcome to PiP ... an evergrowing circle of true poetic friendships~ It is a pleasure to have you on board~ Having been, at different times, both the potter and the putty ... I can feel the all of this piece~ Looking forward to seeing you share even more with us~ Thanks for joining~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - [email protected] |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
i love it, yay welcome lol |
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Nikerlz Junior Member
since 2006-08-31
Posts 37California |
Have you ever seen the movie Ghost? With Patrick Swayze? Lol... Welcome! BK |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"They caressed and they teased And they liked to please - And they did. And you did." yes lovely work Karen... welcome |
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BloodyEclipse Junior Member
since 2006-09-07
Posts 16 |
Pain and pleasure pulls us into it's void... I hate these moments in life... You depicted it well |
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Dublin Boy Member
since 2006-08-26
Posts 102UK |
Excellent piece, Karen--A pleasure to read a well-written poem such as this. Cheers, Bill |
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arwen54 Junior Member
since 2006-09-07
Posts 13Welland, Ontario |
thanks everyone...  I already feel like I'm home...  Rich, I've decided to hold off on the contest for now...you can contact me off forum for more info, if you like. |
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