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Highway Song |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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We rode the wind like time winding down another road another place captured stills of warm embraces as laughter met the sky like children we were stealing moments tho' all the while we already knew that some things you just can't buy but borrow we can, and borrow we did. Damp, the feel from morning dew tall grass glistened standing still when sun listened to our morning dripping golden rays drenching hours spent languishing. All was then, and is, as all should be remembering, the passion the glory where upon the day wild was free. Sweet, these visions down pathways of memories where the wind still sings our highway song. |
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arwen54 Junior Member
since 2006-09-07
Posts 13Welland, Ontario |
"wild is free" yes! those were the days... your poem awoke many memories of my past...thanks for sharing your gift  |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
::smiles:: The wind has no voice... until it touches something. I love the way it touched you. Thank you for sharing the touch. Wonderful write ! |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Very much enjoyed the melody and the ride. ~Sunkissed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this sweet lady!! Brought back a lot of my own summer memories. Hugs~Nancy Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"like children we were stealing moments" you sing this highway well Gentle Spirit... beautiful trip |
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BloodyEclipse Junior Member
since 2006-09-07
Posts 16 |
I get it... It reminds me of my life |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I remember those days...oh yes, when passion was so much a part of life..and all else was but a breeze across a fevered brow... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very good, my friend. "When wild was free..." certainly evokes so wonderful memories j. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, now I do enjoy highway music..kewl stuff ms |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
As stated above, you've beautifully revived memories. Sandra |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"All was then, and is, as all should be" And since you know that now, then all is now....love this windswept memory!  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
smiling and thanking you, each for taking the time to stop in. I appreciate each one of you, fellow pipsters. |
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