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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-10-23 07:22 AM

fog dogs gallop
ice skates on glass
leaving their lines
as poems with out letters

messages to the gods perhaps
or the godless that stand
in parking lots
with watchtowers

and higher heels
highhealing
sinners
without knealing

in their minds
and handfuls of coffee
wondering if early is too late
to say slurred sins

while pretending confession

_____________

daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (10-23-2006 09:04 AM).]

Moonkist
Member

since 2006-09-29

Posts 197
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2006-10-23 09:58 AM

I love your writing... imagery soooo surreal sometimes... very Dali-esque!
~Lady Moonkist~
Peace
: ) O ( :

Freedom Now

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2006-10-23 10:03 AM

thanks ms moon..you bless me

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2006-10-23 10:57 AM

hmmm...I don't think it's ever to early or to late D. (grinz)

Your writing is so unique big guy, and yep,
I'm addicted to the smile it brings each morning

Enjoyed your sonday thoughts.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2006-10-23 03:18 PM

ms gs, thanks little lady

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

5 posted 2006-10-23 07:57 PM

always a pleasure to read you

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2006-10-23 08:43 PM

DS

I heard the fog couldn't see this sun of me.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2006-10-24 12:43 PM

Stranger
the image of fog dogs galloping
tripped me up
I am standing very still
watching

really nice stuff here

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2006-10-24 07:12 AM

ms g, thanks for the touch

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ms martie, thanks little neighbor for moving the window closer to the day

_______________

lady one, yes they are heated hounds, so glassy eyed and panting...but they run from the sun, thanks ms

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