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Open Poetry #39
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Grinch
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Whoville
0 posted 2006-10-19 04:38 PM


Upon this shadow mortals stand
Look back that they may understand
From what has passed what is to be
But there’s the painful rub you see

For as they peer into the past
Beyond the line the finger cast
And ponder deeds long gone perplexed
They miss the now and waste the next
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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-10-19 09:32 PM

fantastic!
AltairVonCreed
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2 posted 2006-10-20 01:06 AM

I really felt a fast sense of thought while reading this, gave off a perfect sense of wasted time. Great work.
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