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Open Poetry #39

LSD BRUISE

shirtless
Member

since 2006-04-29

Posts 359

0 posted 2006-10-18 07:00 PM

I saw two children
playing
on a hunk of wood
that meant a turtle

I cried
because I was happy
I cried
because somehow I was convinced
that the distance
between the children and the turtle
like the stars which broke their nighttime hearts for me
like the six hundredth murder in Detroit
would become a copper
in the pocket of my soul

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seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

1 posted 2006-10-18 08:34 PM

Very deep, yet touchable. This is a very well executed work, and I do like it very much.

Sandra

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2006-10-18 09:44 PM

Sitting here
in an awe,
having learned what I have learned,
looking to strive for "more"
in poetry
and not just glossing over humanity
or even to romance it.

Ah, the copper...

Well done, Sir.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2006-10-18 10:05 PM

Most excellent...yes, enjoyed.
Hugs.

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

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