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Last Days of Autumn
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Last Days of Autumn |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan 
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Last Days Of Autumn Gone is an Indian summer’s chance, to singe the blaze in one final dance, of heated hue ; last days to remember, before the chill of virgin November. Iced rains of fall, her death approaching, as rigor comes slowly encroaching, upon last leaves, that lie crushingly still, awaiting winter’s bleak white seed to spill. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a vivid feeling this brings! nice work! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"before the chill of virgin November" ahhh Sandra I love your description of November beautiful work my friend been missing you... |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Enjoyed the read! At least with the seasons we know that "goodbye" is not for ever. |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Dixie, Thank you for the nice comment! I'm always so glad to see you've stopped in! Sandra ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Kate, Thank you, too! I've missed being about. A second job has cut my free time. I manage to peek in during the wee hours at times. I do want to tell you how much I love the variety your work is showing. Absolutely breathtaking! Sandra ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Helen, I've never quite looked at the seasons change along those lines, and I must say, it is a perfect way to view them! Thank you for the comment as well as the insight! Sandra |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sandra~ As always, your words fall in kaleidoscopic colors for all to enjoy~ How lovely this~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Thank you Marge. You are always a warm smile on the chilliest of Autumn's days. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How lovely, and yet melancholy this is Sandra. Very well expressed indeed. Hugs~Nancy Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Nancy, Melancholy is just what I was shooting for. Nice to know I made it somewhere near my mark! Thank you! Sandra |
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