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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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Called to say he smoked a cigarette in the shower today like those cool kids do I tried to tell you It's like screaming in a bathroom full of steam and hidden meanings trying to get you to understand and it's not what you think You said you wouldn't let me drink myself into a cloud I could float by on he is so far gone why don't you chase after him for awhile. |
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Sarkany Junior Member
since 2006-10-14
Posts 32 |
Hi Disillusionment maybe a bit of frustration comes through this poem. It seems like "you have been there and done that" and your warning is falling on deaf ears. Saekany |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
This is very well done. It is nice to read your poems again. Juli -Juju -"So you found a girl Who thinks really deep thougts What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silient all these Years, Tori Amos |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Most excellent write...good to read you again! Hugs~Nancy Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
It's always fun to try to convince people to listen. I have missed this place, and although I vanish sometimes, I always come back. It's like family.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good one nice to read you |
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JLHunter Senior Member
since 2006-10-08
Posts 557CA United States |
Hi, Allysa. Short, emotion-filled and packs a "punch"...just the way that I like them. Excellent write. John xo I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran |
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