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Walter Poe
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0 posted 2006-10-16 10:52 AM


I watched her back as she walked
My endless angel leaving my life

She moved like silk across ice
Like a snake across the snow

She slithered away out into the night

She was gone my beautiful ghost
forgotten in the mists of midnight

Till only darkness remained of her
And moonlight whispered her name

My light My love gone from my gaze

Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.


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Somewhere near the Rainbow
1 posted 2006-10-16 12:11 PM


Great write, I felt the sadness within. I do feel though that the vision may be gone, but the memories will live on in your heart.
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