Open Poetry #39 |
Scrawl Upon The Snow |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Scrawl Upon Then Snow The wind sings a lullaby of white From the porch, candles beckon the night A moment seems blessed in its song Leaned in visions drifting deep for so long There we danced in the lingered return Guiding hand at the waist, love will learn In the warmth of your eyes my desire Turning chill to a fevered night’s fire There the earth rose to mold magically Every grace sapphire lace valiantly As the snow, came your kisses alight When the wind sings a lullaby of white Copyright Kkh 10/12/06 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"There the earth rose to mold magically Every grace sapphire lace valiantly As the snow, came your kisses alight When the wind sings a lullaby of white" A most lovely write Kathleen.. even though the snow arrived earlier than usual this year. ~Warm autumnal hugs, Nancy~ Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ooooooooooooooo beautiful!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"The wind sings a lullaby of white" there are just some lines that amaze me and draw me back time and again this is a lovely poem TD... |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
A very soothing and beautiful write. Love the rhyme and flow in this. Lovely work. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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JLHunter Senior Member
since 2006-10-08
Posts 557CA United States |
Hi, TD. I agree with Steve. "As the snow, came your kisses alight When the wind sings a lullaby of white" ...is a captivating couplet. Very lovely, indeed. John xo Pinky: Gee, Brain, what are we going to do tonight? |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Softly sensual...and yes, the final couplet is a great finale. CG |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is beyond lovely....beautiful writing! |
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