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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-10-12 07:10 AM



gangery of leather
on the avenue on midnight noon
rattle glass witnessing
the unholy in candy coating

metal wine of perfume paint
vibrations with vulgar echoing
lady faces changing clothing
into something more comfortable

then the nearly nothing
of tattoo zoos and lean downs
that feed the yawns of eye guys
in their overcoat phxsedos

and tomorrow is a fix way's easy


_____________

daark

scribblenote: v-town downtown, scooter tin and sin behind the avenue off of fix way.



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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2006-10-12 08:16 AM


lady faces changing clothing
into something more comfortable
---------------------------
This has a relaxing feel to it D
one where ya can sit back and mellow out.  
Nice work hon.

Sunshine
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2 posted 2006-10-12 01:18 PM


Sounds like a saturday strumming...

very smooth....


The Lady
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3 posted 2006-10-12 04:57 PM



"and tomorrow is a fix way's easy"

enjoyed this
Stranger...


Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2006-10-12 06:27 PM


ms gs, thanks lady friend

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ms sun, off the avenue is always a different set of dice

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ladyone, thanks for the waltz by wave

aziza
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5 posted 2006-10-14 02:59 AM


Man, it must be the time of night that I am reading this, but it sounds like the world of the lonely to me.  Great images, great poem.  

az

amberhues
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6 posted 2006-11-01 07:00 PM


The images in this are fantastic. I am enjoying your words.
Magnus
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7 posted 2006-11-01 07:06 PM


You be the man, Daark....you do have a touch
with ur lingo...

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2006-11-02 06:56 AM


ms az, thank you for the read ms..just highway stuff,

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amber, thank you for the walk by

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bromag, thanks guy

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