Open Poetry #39 |
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..The Magic of the Bay.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. ![]() |
![]() . Turning back looking over her sun kissed shoulder for just one more glance at the quiet waters of the bay She could be heard to softly whisper, "I shall return..soon...I promise" Oh, how she always dreaded that final farewell to her favourite summer sanctuary each September- Already she missed the call of the Kingfisher.. The whirring wings of the delicate hummingbirds.. The howl of the wild coyote in the night.. But most of all..she would miss the bay. For the bay held a special magic. It's tranquil waters soothed her troubled mind.. Was it the glorious sunsets ending each perfect day? ...Or perhaps it was the familiar tug of a bass on her line. And in the distance the delighted laughter of the wind-surfers. It was more than ordinary magic..the bay lured her in.. almost hypnotically it held her close in a loving embrace.. softly caressing her wind blown hair, calming her like a giving lover. Leaving her with a feeling of inner peace she had never before known.. Something magical happens out there she has yet been able to explain to anyone.. Perhaps, others must have felt it as well... or had they? Yes, she would remember to bank each and every summer memory... And, in the midst of winter she will again realize there lives within her an invincible summer. . |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
it is good to have a special place mine is rhosneiger on the island of Mona(angelessy wales) I try and go back there every year Once the home of the Druid culture You can sit by the sacred pool and almost hear them Glad you are back May you go again many times arthur |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
why are humans so drawn to the mystic of nature's waters? Nancy, I'm so happy you had this time to nurture and rejuvinate your entire being.... welcome home. thank you for sharing so beautifully your experiences.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress A delightful write and read. Good memories. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady e...what an eye you have on your pen end enjoyed it ms |
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Dublin Boy Member
since 2006-08-26
Posts 102UK |
A seductively enchanting poem--lovely. Cheers, Bill |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
And so the harvest begins, Enchanted one! Beautiful thoughts you pen for me this morning. ~ Love, K. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Enchantress~ Seductively the water calls remembering that in the ripples there abides a pool of membories that baptize the soul of the searcher in poetic photography waiting to be shared~ Come ye now from the edge of the glow of Rondeau Bay knowing that the magnetic memories will draw you back again~ LOVED my postie card, I did~ ![]() Now ... some photos of those bass, please ? I know ... no doubt mountains of laundry are waiting to be done, sprucing up of coming home ... *sighs* of just knowing the summer is fleeting ...~ Love you adorable lady ... and missed you muchly~ *HUGLETS* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Nancy...other will see, but not like this lovely poem or with such words as yours...still I'm glad that you are back. ![]() |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I fully understand this - I didn't go away at all this summer as I live in the best vacation spot there is! There is something about the call of serenity that keeps us grounded, and I suppose Mother Earth invented that call, you think? Lovely NL. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Although, you didn't want to leave, I am glad you are back. Hope you had better luck than I have been having on catching fish. I think I forgot how to catch themm. |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Thank you for sharing this beauty and how it affects you. I cannot share your sorrow in leaving...because I am glad you are back. ::Snoopy dances:: YAY !!!! ::smiles:: Yes, Its all about ME. LOL :: bows :: |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
![]() Welcome home Nancy Lee!! Had a chance to peak at this today, but couldn't respond, so I savored it for the right moment. sigh....beautiful this...you. Yanno? I hate when you go on vacation, but always know that when you return we are in for such treats.. methinks maybe there will be more to come. ![]() Luvya sweet lady. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Lovely, Nancy, and a stunning picture too. "she will again realize there lives within her an invincible summer." I can relate to this and that summer is like yesterday. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
You have an invincible spirit Tinker. I'm glad you shared this taste of your summer vacation with us. Your bay sounds like a wonderful place. believe in what your heart feels... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Something magical happens out there she has yet been able to explain to anyone.. Perhaps, others must have felt it as well... or had they?" just coming home myself Enchantress I know the feel of this beautiful work... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
NancyLee, this is magical! ![]() |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
"turning back . . . for just one more glance" beautiful! you have a way of painting with words, my friend! H, Robert |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
So beautiful, so touching, so sad to see summer come to an end! huggles, Marti To the world YOU may be one person, but to God, you are the world! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome home, beachgirl. It's good to read you again. ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
~Thank you all for your great replies! You were all missed and thought about each day...well almost each day. ![]() I hope everyone had a chance to get away to their favourite spot and just relax. Playing catch up on my reading here in pip now.. it's amazing what you can miss in just a short while! Love and hugs, Nancy~ |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
I love the colors cast when the sunsets. Thank you for the view through your eyes. ~Sunkissed. |
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arwen54 Junior Member
since 2006-09-07
Posts 13Welland, Ontario |
your poem makes me feel like I was there with you at your bay..beautiful words... thank you ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Enchanting One, the time (11:11) that you posted this divine poem, did not escape my notice, dear kindred spirit. ![]() I felt rested and rejeuvenated as you took me on a journey to your special place. Thanks! I needed that! It's good to have you back!!! ![]() Sending you a big, loving hug, Linda |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It takes someone who has found that special place within themselves to fully appreciate a bay such as this...enjoyed...James |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
your return provides us another of your wonderful images - loved it Nancy - Paul |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
hmm perhaps were so drawn to the waters because we dont really know whats in them, just the same as space but the waters everyone can get to not just astronauts, i think ill add this to my library ![]() Swinging the Dead in this Free Fall you call life, Swinging the Dead on a Deathride |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is so very lovely. *S* I'm missing mightily the respite and renewal of my September treat... Thank you for sharing this! *S* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
~Thank you all once again my friends~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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