Open Poetry #39 |
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A Darkling Poet |
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Grinch Member Elite
since 2005-12-31
Posts 2929Whoville |
(The Thrush Replies to Thomas Hardy) I perched above a coppice gate One bloody freezing day, I felt a bit disconsolate My wife had flown away And great black clouds all gathered round Like someone burning tyres I wish that mankind had not found That knack for starting fires A poet stood beneath my tree Tom Hardy was his name So I chirped a soliloquy To ask of him his game: “ Oi Thomas find another gate To lean your arse upon I’m trying to attract a mate I lost me other one.” The duffer then starts smiling up; Some Cheshire cat gone mad, Like he’d just found a golden cup He never knew he had I wished the stupid git would go And sling his bleeding hook But as I sang a song or two He scribbled in his book Why didn’t he just go away? The chicks were running scared That plonker poet was in the way Of me and my new bird! Just then a fear began to grow; His smile began to haunt Could Thomas Hardy somehow know Some secret that I don’t? |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I love this one! I love the way the bird talks and it's so funny and real too. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Grinch Member Elite
since 2005-12-31
Posts 2929Whoville |
thanks for the reply. I really should have included the poem that this was an answer to. http://www.englishverse.com/poems/the_darkling_thrush |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
it's truly delightful! |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Grinch~ A wonderful read ... the Thomas Hardy link was very helpful too~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Love this one. |
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