Open Poetry #39 |
Jupiter Kiss |
Refugee Member
since 2006-08-04
Posts 97 |
Floating through your atmosphere Drifting closer to you now The slow passage of time The miles that feel like years Lost in the darkness Of the before and behind And melting like a wax candle Here in the void between Where there is no sound Only us burning bright You, pulling me in Closer as I descend To your gravity, I give in |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Friend Ref...this is kewl..enjoyed the view |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ohhh I like this, and that ending? Perfect!!! Much enjoyed. |
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Refugee Member
since 2006-08-04
Posts 97 |
Thank you, much appreciated. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wow! Jupiter's magical kiss... Wow!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
outstanding! |
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