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Mirage |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Mirage By: Noah Eaton 10/10/06 Every day, where I rest, I want you more, with every breath, you leave a shadow, where I want to disembark, I’d give anything, just to explore your spark, I’d rather reach to your sky, with my heart beating fast, than lie with my heart beating slow, pretending your illusion has passed, cause every time you show, my heart glows… I know how strongly I love you, your guiding touch is my heart’s massage, I get this feeling I can feel you, kissed by the static of your mirage, every day I keep believing, my sky is your heart, and soon you’ll fall into my arms, the angels must have spent more time on you, if I can already feel you, from afar… Prisms dance, across my eyes, blinding me, with your sweet surprise, I want to define my life, by all that I give, and I’ll give anything, just to provide you warmth as you live, I wonder if there’s a castle, that can house a dream, I believe with you, I'll see the wonders that be, cause every time you show, my heart glows… I know how strongly I love you, your guiding touch is my heart’s massage, I get this feeling I can feel you, kissed by the static of your mirage, every day I keep believing, my sky is your heart, and soon you’ll fall into my arms, the angels must have spent more time on you, if I can already feel you, from afar… I’ve been kissed, I’ve been kissed, kissed by the static of your mirage… I’ve been kissed, I’ve been kissed, kissed by the static of your mirage… I know how strongly I love you, your guiding touch is my heart’s massage, I get this feeling I can feel you, kissed by the static of your mirage, every day I keep believing, my sky is your heart, and soon you’ll fall into my arms, the angels must have spent more time on you, if I can already feel you, from afar… …soon you’ll fall into my arms, from afar… …soon you’ll fall into my arms, from afar… …soon you’ll fall into my arms, from afar… "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" Mother Teresa |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A beautiful song sung Noah!! Nicely done lil buddie. Hugs, so pleased to see your words again.  |
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ChePacifica Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 58Ignore Alien Orders |
read like great lyrics to a song to me poet |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I see you've never lost your touch. Such a gift for conveying feelings and pulling your reader in. It's good to read you again, as I've always enjoyed. p.s. I have the same shirt. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Noah, that was such a soft 'n sweet song of love. Your dream girl doesn't know what she's missing! She better hurry up and find you before someone else steals your heart! To love and romance! Linda  |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
"kissed by the static of your mirage" What a wonderful line!!! You built a fantastic song around it Noah. Enjoyed this much! Sandra |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
A beautiful poem/song. Your talents are admired. Rae |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
This was so beautiful! Yes, you're talents are very admired. Hugs and Hershey bars! ~Kira |
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