Open Poetry #39 |
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vela of whispers |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast ![]() |
the bayou speaks secrets bout a lady in the pretty up before the morning has color how she makes them sounds with her mouth smiles like a woman word special mojo left candy under the sun she sips the dark water conjur and slips her day dreamery on wearing the north wind grigri and touching a blind man's eyes before saint barbie yawns she sways the whisper speak vela ______________ daark |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
I was wondering when you would be back to float my mind a wee bit. You were worth the wait. Sandra |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sandra..thanks lady friend..when with the wind it always returns one they say. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger you know that old song... "Well if you see my lttle red rooster Please drive him home Ain't been no peace in the barnyard Since my little red rooster's been gone" welcome home and I like the poem |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
hello stranger. always a pleasure ![]() My spirit will rise |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
caramel sounds.... well done! ![]() |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone...yep I remember that tune..it was the 3rd hit by elvis right? (grin)thanks lady ________________ ms groves, thank you for the eyes ms, always thank you __________________ ms sun, amber with caramel quite the blend, thanks |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Sometimes when I read your poems, I think of syrup. I feel that thick texture slowly slide over my mind. aziza |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
dawn mists ancient melody perseus and panache honey-combed in siren sounds rhythmic oceans and lorelei ~ kl [This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (09-11-2006 12:22 AM).] |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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