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Open Poetry #39

i look at my death

william foos
Member

since 2006-09-13

Posts 77
schenectady,new york,usa

0 posted 2006-10-09 10:27 AM

i look at my death
in the center of my mind
breathless from the earilest moment
as my flesh begins to rot
just walking down the street
spray that colone just does not work
no one will miss me now
when will i become dust
looking at my own death

i see what i write and write what i see

JesusChristPose
Senior Member

since 2005-06-21

Posts 777
Pittsburgh, Pa

1 posted 2006-10-09 01:19 PM

These are the type of topics I like. Your poem was quite visual, indeed. Enjoyed.

"Melvin, the best thing you got going for you is your willingness to humiliate yourself."

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-10-09 04:36 PM

masterful piece
william

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