Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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2006-06-18
05:22 PM
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Woodland, defused shade. I close my eyes, stygian shadows lengthen, a slither of light, an iris of amber, elongates, thrills my inner being, my world remains grey-blue, like a dense woodland, where nothing grows upon its shade haunted earth.
[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (06-19-2006 10:58 AM).]
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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
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2006-06-18
05:34 PM
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Something I know about. Very captivating write. It's the aperture that brings salvation.
Awareness of inner beauty changes the world.
Love, Margherita
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
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2006-06-18
05:46 PM
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Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
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2006-06-18
06:16 PM
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A most wonderful write Phil. Great use of imagery. Hugs~Nancy~Somewhere in my heart I'm always dancing with you in the summer rain ~
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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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2006-06-19
10:34 AM
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Phil, your writing has become intense with visuals...strong with feelings, and thought provoking examples...enjoyed
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jody5
Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876
California, U.S.A.
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2006-06-19
12:37 PM
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Beautiful Picture, Nice write.
Huggs Kimberly
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Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
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2006-06-20
05:57 PM
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Your pen is mighty, whether it be Light or Dark ink that flows from it.
Linda
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