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Crumble ( tanka with thanks to LeeJ for inspire)
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Crumble ( tanka with thanks to LeeJ for inspire) |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach 
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~*~*~*~ giddy on church steps unaware and innocent of crumble building eager to play grown-up games as if that's all that mattered ~*~*~*~ . . . . . . Chris Barker June 2006 ~~~~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, I'm honored to have inspired such beauty...this was exceptional writing lady very much enjoyed... thank you so much for sharing...love what you see |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I love the feel of these words...it is amazing how you can bring to life this vision with so few words...*big hugs* |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lee - I so wish that I could write as you do, with such ease. My thoughts get all jumbled up after just a few lines I am afraid. Many thanks & Hugs !!! Startime - thankyou so much for your kind comments!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MsChris~ I just love your little jumbled up thoughts~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Chris! Reading you from Jessica's house at the moment. Love this one..most excellent. Miss ya and love ya, Teed. *Keep your eye to the sky*  ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
The crumbling makes me giddy. ::smiles:: ((( Chris ))) Well done ! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Oh Chris, you depict slices of life ever so wonderfully in so few words, sweet friend, I could truly see a vibrant picture reading this that stuck out like a painting on a wall, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou all so much. Big Hugs All Round !! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Maybe love IS blind? Great write!! JL |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
I am so glad you are going to church and such a sweet poem. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A picture painted with your words Chris. Very much enjoyed. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
JL, jody & scorpio - thankyou very much. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beauty by a beauty inspired by a beauty |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
You ain't so bad yourself Dix ! Thanks & Hugs! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You do these so well. I really like this one. |
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Frank W. Torres Member
since 2006-06-10
Posts 133 |
Sometime there are others things that matter. Good poem. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou Sue & Frank. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Ain't that the truth.... sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yup skyshine...sad but true. Thanks for reading and commenting! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
had to come back and dive into this one again... wish so, I could write and say so much in so few words...this was awesome... enjoyed it and you... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
You are a joy Lee. Thankyou again. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Chris....I remember a time like this...you wrote it perfectly! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Chris, your terrific tanka conjured up a kodak moment of my own!  Linda  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thanks & Hugs Martie & Linda !! |
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