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Kimberly ann Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 61 |
In some way we are all like rivers. Sometimes rivers are soft, smooth, and calm, like nothing is wrong. Sometimes rivers hit rocks and are hard to get over. Then there are times when you can barely bare it like the river it flowing so fast it’s unbelievable. So how are we alike? Some people might also say river look calm on top but furious inside, just like us. We show ourselves as calm but inside we have everything going on. Rough times come and go. But as you go on it gets easier to move, because you get stronger with every hard decision. So you tell me. How are we alike? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I think you have said it very accurately... Rivers hide so much beneath such a tranquil surface... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
But as you go on it gets easier to move, because you get stronger with every hard decision. You are right. Our existence is well compared to a river. And we move towards a goal. Love, Margherita |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Love your thoughts, in agreement here. martyjo |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
I enjoyed this write, it is excellent. Ypu have a strong understanding of life. Huggs Kim |
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