Open Poetry #38 |
Eye Of the Beholder |
Will Rhyme Member
since 2006-05-22
Posts 149 |
The "I" of the beholder... glassy bent stoned; the riddled stare told her was time to go home. Dad's yesterday dishes, left clean in a row... sparked of her sweet wishes and kisses in tow. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
sparked of her sweet wishes and kisses in tow Love leaves the sign of its passage, always. Beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
sounds like one loved harder than the other....subtle in its strong expression.. |
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Will Rhyme Member
since 2006-05-22
Posts 149 |
Thank you...both of you! Will |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow Will I am amazed at this...a short write but very powerful |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write!!! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I enjoyed this write. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Will Rhyme Member
since 2006-05-22
Posts 149 |
And...many thanks to all! Will |
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