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Nelo
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0 posted 2006-06-17 03:16 PM



Second post of the......well, ever! This is one I also posted on poetry.com called Vanity Fair.

All we live for is nothing
All we breathe for is a lie
Our delusions are what fuels us
'Till the day that we die
Success, power, money what does it mean?
A chance to ditch obscurity, to finally be seen?
Success is a delusion, power a farce
A reflection of where we stand and who we are
When its all been said
After all is done
Who among us can say we're the successful ones?

© Copyright 2006 Sam Jenkins - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-06-17 08:32 PM


Sam~
Well ... you can say you've been a successful POET~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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marcel
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2 posted 2006-06-19 04:39 PM


Definitely left us with thoughts and questions to ponder...
The Lady
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3 posted 2006-07-15 12:44 PM



"Though true love could have been a contender
Are you there?
Say a prayer for the Pretender"

    ~ Jackson Browne

Excellent poem, excellent question, Sam.

Well done.

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4 posted 2006-07-15 12:52 PM


Sounds as though you're still searching.
Not power , not riches.  
Music, books, poetry, friends, children and true love as someone else mentioned are possibilities. Joyce

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