Open Poetry #38 |
Harlot |
Nelo New Member
since 2006-06-16
Posts 8Around |
Fare thee well,Thou fleeting, fading love No glimmer of hope or wishes to the stars above Love lies roadside so frail and slain It lies so weakly lifeless and blood-stained And the heart now of stone once again goes unclaimed So you were the harlot who lurks in the dark Entering lives just to claim another heart Was I another conquest, Was I just a part Of the quest to leave a trail of shattered hearts Sweet dreams of love carry me away From toil of night and cold dark days For now the joys of love doth lie As cold hello's and warm goodbye's And as I lay me down to sleep I beckon to know why my heart doth bleed And why I let down the walls of my heart If its just going to get torn apart |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
well done! a beautifullly written broken heart ~welcome~ |
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Nelo New Member
since 2006-06-16
Posts 8Around |
Thanks, I hated it myself, but glad to see someone who likes it! |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
I dont know why you hated it. Its really very good. |
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Nelo New Member
since 2006-06-16
Posts 8Around |
I guess it is true. A person is really his or her own worst critic. Thank you |
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openthoughts Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 94Where the child can be free |
the writer pays attention to the feel more while the reader focuses on the words and I can tell you as a reader that the words are beautiful. In pure honesty, it could be one of the best poems i've read in a while |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
It's true. It's an excellent poem Nelo. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! A wonderful entrance post you have gifted us with. Please check your email for a special Passion's gretting~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Frank W. Torres Member
since 2006-06-10
Posts 133 |
I like it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sam~ Welcome to PiP~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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