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Troy
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since 2006-06-04

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0 posted 2006-06-16 12:45 PM

In Passing

Of time disrobed, sanctioned through her silken door
Unto realms unresonanced that cling no more,
The least and all of Nothing to inherit
In Forever Fields of unscriptured merit,
Returned to Sender as to life before.
A single fold In your robes
Of recursive time
Unfolded.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2006-06-16 12:55 PM

I was just signing off to go to work when this one appeared.

Tomorrow I'll return to it, for it demands more than a cursory read.
Encircled within my own timeless folds...this piece so far has a feel to it that resonates.

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
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2 posted 2006-06-16 07:57 AM

Troy...Really enjoyed reading this and the flow is great. Thanks for sharing...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2006-06-16 08:05 AM

beautiful, sad but beautiful...I felt life and reality in this one

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

4 posted 2006-06-16 02:40 PM

beyond the veil
of pomp and circumstance
back to the womb,
from room to room
life and death, unfolding
endlessly, timelessly
in the ultimate circle

Jess
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since 2006-06-06

Posts 243
Washington

5 posted 2006-06-16 04:32 PM

melancholy and thought provoking. I Always look forward to your posts Troy

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

6 posted 2006-06-16 04:42 PM

I love this!
beautiful indeed

Troy
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since 2006-06-04

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7 posted 2006-06-17 12:33 PM

Midnitesun ~

It was a pleasure to read your poetic reply. Thank you!

Troy
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since 2006-06-04

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8 posted 2006-06-17 12:33 PM

Paul and LeeJ ~

Thanks for reading. Appreciate the comments.

Troy
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since 2006-06-04

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9 posted 2006-06-17 12:39 PM

Jess ~

That was a really nice compliment. Thank You.

I don't plan to submit any time soon but I will respond to the one's I like and yours, I've noticed, are almost always among those. I especially enjoy the way you write on mythological themes which is seldom done these days - or as well.

Troy
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since 2006-06-04

Posts 52
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10 posted 2006-06-17 12:40 PM

Passing Shadows ~

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Your non de plume btw, is not unlike what I was writing about.

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