Open Poetry #38 |
Step Printed |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Step Printed A hobnailed boot or socked toes carpenter’s cleave of muscled know High flown creed or salt of ground …these are the men fathers, renown… Manicured nails or crusted quick justice reigns in moments thick; golf club curl or surgeon’s hand some sons care for mothers grand… all the stages of a boy from his childhood through his toys most may be a father, true all came from a boy, like you. Footsteps given some were followed; hard times driven, anger, swallowed… For a moment, sit back, enjoy… age given memories to a grown-up boy. To my Sons-in-Law and my husband, and the Male Poets of Passions…. Happy Father’s Day, Men. " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Aww, this is beautiful Karilea.. and from me to all the fathers here at Passions... Happy Father's Day! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
That's nice. It's hard to conceive that our Dad's, who always seemed larger than life, were little boys once. Wonderful thoughts and good wishes. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie....all those men came from fathers of such diversity, becoming fathers perhaps, or poets it's true...a good way to remember is this poem from you! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Happy Father's Day to all men ~we love you~ even when we say otherwise |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
An wonderful Father's Day gift, SIL! *hugs*...jo |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Thank you for those most warming thoughts, Karilea. As I reflect on a recent new grandson, watching my son as a new dad, all the things dads do or try to do comes back to me. There are a couple of regretful thoughts, but most are good. Hugs, Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Beautiful write Kari. Happy Fathers Day to all the men of Pips |
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Frank W. Torres Member
since 2006-06-10
Posts 133 |
Very nice indeed. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Beautiful tribute. Happy Father's Day to all fathers, grandfathers, and godfathers! ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful!! Happy Father's Day to all |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Simply beautiful, K. Patricia |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank You dearest Sun...A special gift, accepted and not to soon be forgotten. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww Karilea, this is a beautiful dedication. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"For a moment, sit back, enjoy… age given memories to a grown-up boy." Could it be any different than this, exactly as you have written? Very true! Thanks Sunshine. JL |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
stunning!!!!! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Karilea, I relly enjoyed this,thinking back to my three "boys to men". martyjo |
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