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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2006-06-16 02:47 PM

I spin within
the cochlea of you

     can you hear me?
     can you hear me?

a never ending circle
points along infinity
within
without

     I hear you shout
     I hear you shout

but cannot reach
beyond the space I'm in

for I am already within
reverberating
spinning
within

the cochlea of you

     can you hear me?

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2006-06-16 04:20 PM

I can hear you, Kacy...quiet just enough to hear you. Interesting thoughts. *hugs*....jo

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2006-06-16 04:24 PM

Loxias says “Loud and clear!”

Another good one!

JL

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2006-06-16 04:37 PM

XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

4 posted 2006-06-16 06:07 PM

::smiles:: :: bows ::

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

5 posted 2006-06-16 07:26 PM

I love your portrayal here of one spinning within the inner ear of another.... To me this seems so very representative of thoughts, words, emotions, poetry, etc. etc.

I enjoyed reading.

-Bob

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2006-06-16 07:38 PM

So, you are into ears now? Watch out for
wax balls....perhaps I should rethink that.

The Shadow in Blue
Member

since 2006-05-18

Posts 493
EL, Michigan

7 posted 2006-06-16 08:18 PM

I adore the quiet inner thought provoking vibe I get from this piece. I especially liked the repeated lines. You are a true master Midnitesun and I'm glad I can learn from your poetry.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2006-06-16 10:06 PM

If you only knew!
You shed such a brilliant light, Kacy~

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2006-06-16 10:15 PM

Knowing full well of inner ear problems,
I enjoyed this look at how I could perceive
the most troublesome times...
and remember to take it in stride.

Thanks, Kacy!

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

10 posted 2006-06-16 10:32 PM

Indeed It Did "hits me in the solar plexus".

I Thought of You Today,
And What We Could've Had
For A Brief Moment I Had You
And Still, I Somehow Knew
I'd Have To Let Go

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

11 posted 2006-06-16 11:42 PM

these replies
are warming my cochlea

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

12 posted 2006-06-16 11:50 PM

fascinating and smooth as silk! One of my favorites!

("Shhhh...If I'm very, very quiet, just maybe she won't hear the vibrations of my footsteps as I grab this for my library and run with it! Oh heck, I knew she had great sensory perception. Caught again!"

misce

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

13 posted 2006-06-16 11:52 PM

cathy

what a card! thanks, lady

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