Open Poetry #38 |
Oungan |
Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oungan He was a priest in those days, before the new king came. Before the stones rolled away and the seals were broken he spoke for the damned, the remnant, the offal that washed up on the sands. He was a priest in those days. He raised what passed for hands to what then passed for heaven and called in heavy, rolling tones for vengeance on the righteous sons of gods who could not find him, could not see him for the light that shone like glare of glory from their empty eyes. He was a priest in those days. *** Now he sits and rocks, rocks his skinny body grips his claws in armpits, folded in himself. He stinks and hopes that heaven smells him. He whines and knows that no one hears. He moans and knows that no one cares. Sometimes he sings, a cracked and thready tenor scrabbling through the hot and humid night like a cricket sawing in his niece’s bedroom. She grins her snaggle jackal grin and pulls the filthy pillow close against her cheek and heaves her long lean body across the sweaty sheets in rhythm to his music. When she’s had too much to drink sometimes she calls out, “Ride me!” But that’s a holy thing and not for drunken women too lazy for the washing. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
This reads like a song. Are you referring to Togo LAT 10.0667 LON 0.8000? Or the New Orleans spiritualists? I thought Voodoo was dead. Kinda Creepy. But I enjoyed your rendition. JL |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
brilliant! spellbinding! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Excellent....every edgy word!! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Thanks, guys. Yeah, I think that's the problem--voodoo is dead and what is left cozies up to what killed it. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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