Open Poetry #38 |
Beauty |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beauty A smile that only you can give to me. A softness like an angel living within your personality. And my want for your kiss and the bliss it would bring to me. JamesLee 20May 2006 |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
Some ways it feels unfinished, then maybe that is the effect. For in reading your poem, so many questions come to the surface. Therefore this is a "thinkers poem", so is a healthy read and pleasant in ways expressed a poet who cares |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is pretty and wistful at the same time. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
You've described "Beauty" very well here. -Bob |
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