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Debo
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since 2006-04-18
Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.
0 posted 2006-06-02 02:13 AM


Wondering through past memories
I find that my mind keeps bringing
Up pictures of you.
You once were someone
That made me feel
Safe and warm.
Now these thoughts of you
Make me shiver to the bone
As if I was left out in
The winter snow
Frozen and all alone
You are so cold.

Debo
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Will Rhyme
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since 2006-05-22
Posts 149
1 posted 2006-06-02 02:16 AM

I can almost see this.

Nice Job


Will
Debo
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since 2006-04-18
Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.
2 posted 2006-06-02 11:15 AM

This write came from life's experience.
And it sucked for a while. But I am happier then he ever will. He doesn't even like himself.
Will Rhyme thank you for your honest thoughts.

Debo
froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
3 posted 2006-06-15 06:43 PM

I agree with Will Ryhme on this read.
Glad your happy now.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi
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