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StevenS
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0 posted 2006-06-14 10:52 AM


Your Shade Of Blue

My song of love for you
is written between the lines.
It must be read with the heart
the flowers are beneath the vines.

The love song that I'm singing
was ment for your heart alone.
Can't you hear it in the silence
behind those high walls of stone.

Though I've written all the words
your heart may never see.
This song of love I'm singing
still needs a melody.

You think love has passed you by
I used to think that too.
But now what I'm thinking is
I love your shade of blue.


Relax all,I am a writer!:-) Sometimes I just write about the things I see.:-)


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1 posted 2006-06-14 11:15 AM


What a lovely way to say "I love you"
In wonderful shades of blue.
Good one Steven

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2 posted 2006-06-14 11:16 AM


I like it!
JL
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3 posted 2006-06-14 11:48 AM


"Relax all,I am a writer!:-) "

And a very good writer too.
Great one StevenS.

JL


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4 posted 2006-06-14 12:22 PM


This is really nice Steven.
Enjoyed. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

LeeJ
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5 posted 2006-06-14 12:45 PM


was happy to read your footnote...me to...

tremendous happy song

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6 posted 2006-06-14 01:17 PM


Beautiful Steven!
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Jess
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7 posted 2006-06-14 02:01 PM


how pretty...reminded me of a fairy tale of young lovers
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8 posted 2006-06-14 02:17 PM


Relaxed here... and may I say how well I think you write?  A pleasure to read!

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9 posted 2006-06-14 02:31 PM


Beautiful blue love....this was very sweet!

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

StevenS
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10 posted 2006-06-14 11:52 PM


Thank You all very much for the read and reply. God Bless! :-)
The Lady
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11 posted 2006-07-09 04:35 PM





"But now what I'm thinking is
I love your shade of blue."

Beautifully done Steve.


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