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caught within the confines of me |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Caught within the confines of me, I sat and pondered an opportunity and realized the time might have passed, the chance for amendments would not last another moment, surely not another day, so I asked the question, anyway the one you were hoping would remain unasked how are you doing? really? are you Ok? and then I found myself slowly backing away in silence, knowing the answer was unutterable and the question, perhaps, inane or at the very least, in vain time is of the essence they say but the timing must be right you are not ready yet to step to the next level of healing |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A core poem, m'dear... a core poem. Now the one that was in my brain will have to find another way to enter me...  |
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ApeironCalamity Junior Member
since 2006-07-03
Posts 10California |
This is great: "time is of the essence they say but the timing must be right" Great poem. ------------------------ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
thanks Karilea, though you will find the word path Taylor, thank you so much! and welcome to the blue poetry pages! |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Hey, you are pretty good at this, you know. I like. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
aw shucks  hello mister Krawdad~sigh~ hi ho,hi ho it's off to work I go tomorrow is another chance hi ho, hi ho, hi ho  |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Your words are so meaningful to all. thanks, martyjo |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, Kacy, this is really something.....it would speak perfectly for me if I sent it to someone I know, but I won't....'cause it's just not time.  ....jo |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I loved this one, and loved the way you did the rhyme scheme in it Kacy, great job. However, it is never too late, but then, you know that.  Carpe' Diem |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Just perfect Kacy. [This message has been edited by The Lady (07-10-2006 03:35 PM).] |
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