Open Poetry #38 |
Rings of Time |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rewrite: Rings of Time The tears that you shed today are The lanterns of tomorrow These candles left along the way But show the embers sorrow The fire of your early youth The passions of your power Impacted in a lovers tooth Filled with sweetness of a flower Vainglory of Amory A stepping stone a moments Isle The story of your glory Each touch of dream of every wile All petals of your lives unfold Vibes of bells that are your chime Each a single story told They are the rings you grab of time Sustain the tear and never fear It is the reason we are here |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We are but spirits on a human journey... and you are our poet... leading the way. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Thank you love. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow Sy what an awesome and deep poem this morning! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Thank you dear. |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Awesome Sy! :-) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'A stepping stone a moments Isle' And with phrases like this you gather me in mesmerize as the charm of your words ring around the pages blue hue of no one else but you *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
StevenS A big thank you my friend. Marge You are a doll. |
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