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Pursuance. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Through tall grasses golden, paper hissing in breezes. Hearts spirit to embolden, natures weather capriciously teases. Freedom whispered to the wind, flying through pearly light. Natures call echoes within to find, dreams of love irradiant bright. Search and you shall see, me chanting a credo to your love. Waiting for sofest heart to hear me, borealis sidewinding high above. ''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God'' |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I LOVE love poetry - and this is so ethereal and enchanting...This is the best that I've read from you thus far  Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Melissa thank you for your kind comments...may your dreams be delightful... Goldenrose. ''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God'' |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Very well done. I really like the stanza: Freedom whispered to the wind, flying through pearly light. Natures call echoes within to find, dreams of love irradiant bright |
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