Open Poetry #38 |
Spontaneity and Grace |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Spontaneity and Grace As sudden, and as easy, as the rain We play, warm energy to spray …In fountains forth Southbound jesters warbled north More to treasure Simple pleasure Lasting pictures paint …Our hearts, without words We are nearer, mirrors of an open affection Leaving cue askew, but in the same direction We have become it seems, subtle streams Holding hands in jubilance such vivid dreams Moving room by room within Scheming with delight, fawning pillow fight Never holding back …A first thought second As passion is free form art Loving falls seeking quench Two hand scooped …And shower drench A miracle of miracles in every way Sound and sudden to display As sudden, and as easy, as the rain We play, within each moment, giving way Copyright Kkh 5/20/06 |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD "Loving falls seeking quench Two hand scooped …And shower drench" Always you please the senses! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Keep going, the chord is nigh...the pen is poised and the mind is filled with so much, awaiting release. watch out for sticky hands and steering wheels.... Use your tongue to signal a turn if need be. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...miracle of miracles... ~*~ I'll bet you don't remember the song, or the play... or do you? |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thanks for the lovely comments all. Smiling at Sunshine...My parents loved music, and the line you selected is a familiar one, but I can't say I can remember the song or the play. Hugs, TD |
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Mike1 New Member
since 2006-04-25
Posts 8 |
A celebration of life! Wonderful piece. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
the song Alegría from Cirque Du Soleil comes to mind when I read this..loved this If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A true joy to read, dear TD! Spontaneity and Grace combined assure BEAUTY! Love, Margherita |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"As passion is free form art" Wonderful line TD. I love this poem. |
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