Open Poetry #38 |
A Warm Sunday Afternoon |
tatalinia Member
since 2005-12-17
Posts 137CA, US |
soft snores of a man off in the distance but here i lie awake bored to death with him it all comes down on me an i see what needs to be seen that through all this misery and strife i was truely meant to be with you and only you searching high and low for the love of my life never ending pits and falls of wasted nothings found you but then lost you in all these blurred surroundings thought i could get by on life without you but your face keeps creeping into my view trying to erase you seems impossible i guess im stuck with reality that i was made for you your voice echoes off into my ears i havent heard it in a while i was told to no longer talk to you they feared i would go back to loving you i guess its true unfinished business but i do not love you at least my heart says so but my head won't stop thinking of you do you feel it too? so why am i still in your picture do you see me in the rearview? we run from this but can we forever hide? i know that in the end it wiill just be me and you your hand will find mine someway somehow don't ask me why im so sure of it i just am on a warm sunday afternoon i will see you your face warm of dazzling glow your eyes staring at a distance into mine waiting for me down that long aisel your woman you have waited for has arrived now come love an collect your bride I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ah, love is such a fickle thing! Enjoyed this. Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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bjones New Member
since 2006-06-13
Posts 3 |
Such longing coupled with insecurity, desire and uncertainty. You captured this well. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I really understand this so well you expressed it in an awesome way |
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Tom Zart Senior Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 682 |
I can feel, see and understand every word wonderful pen work here. |
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howardtsu Senior Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 678 |
what's up tatalinia i liked this |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Awesome poem tatalinia, love the ending! :-) |
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tatalinia Member
since 2005-12-17
Posts 137CA, US |
thanks for all the replys to my poem, appreciate your input I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health |
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Bobomo Junior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 35 |
confidence wrapped in doubt, I enjoyed this very much! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
How does he feel...James |
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tatalinia Member
since 2005-12-17
Posts 137CA, US |
^ ^ James, one does not know of what the other thinks or feels, only can you guess from the actions they show. I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health |
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