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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

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0 posted 2006-06-08 02:51 PM

Say not a word,
let me peer back
into years of your life
through your eyes.
Let us sip
the sweet wine of love,
speaking only
with eyes moistly alive
dancing,
to the same heart tune,
not a
word
uttered
until
the kiss
of chemistry.

[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (06-08-2006 09:13 PM).]

Martie

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1 posted 2006-06-08 03:28 PM

Silence really can be so full of sound! Enjoyed the passionate feeling of this.

Goldenrose
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2 posted 2006-06-08 04:12 PM

Martie thank you for your reply...hope you are well..
Goldenrose.

Will Rhyme
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3 posted 2006-06-08 04:27 PM

Good job, very graphic.

Will

Midnitesun

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Gaia

4 posted 2006-06-08 06:41 PM

oh, this 'screams' passion

Goldenrose
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5 posted 2006-06-08 06:53 PM

Will.. thanks for the kind reply..

Goldenrose.

Goldenrose
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6 posted 2006-06-08 06:54 PM

Kacy ..thank you for noticing the passion..was it so obvious?..LOL..always a pleasure having your comments..

Goldenrose.

iliana
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USA

7 posted 2006-06-08 07:10 PM

Very romantic, Goldenrose....a scene quite memorable........jo

Goldenrose
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8 posted 2006-06-08 07:16 PM

Jo... thank you for your kind words..another pleasure for me to bring to you..

Goldenrose.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

9 posted 2006-06-08 08:17 PM

Silent passion....

yes.

Excellent thought....

I would suggest
a line break
or two...

let me know if you want to
hear my ramblings.

Jess
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since 2006-06-06

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Washington

10 posted 2006-06-08 09:47 PM

"The sweet wine of love" *sigh*

BROTHER JOHN
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11 posted 2006-06-08 09:48 PM

Thanks for your inspiring words. BJ

Goldenrose
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12 posted 2006-06-09 06:23 AM

Karilea..yes i think your suggestion has made the poem beter thank you very much..

Goldenrose.

Goldenrose
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13 posted 2006-06-09 06:24 AM

Jess ..yes a sip of the sweet wine of love is restorative and invigorating..thank you for your words..

Goldenrose.

Goldenrose
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14 posted 2006-06-09 06:25 AM

BJ..glad i could inspire you..thank you for your words..

Goldenrose.

Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

15 posted 2006-07-18 09:18 PM

Very nice!!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink

TinaTrivett
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since 2006-07-15

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16 posted 2006-07-18 09:50 PM

"speaking only
with eyes moistly alive
dancing,
to the same heart tune"

My favorite line...lovely.

passing shadows
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displaced

17 posted 2006-07-19 01:01 AM

wow!

aziza
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18 posted 2006-07-20 10:31 PM

Beautiful.

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