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Open Poetry #38
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0 posted 2006-06-07 06:28 PM


my evening prayers like
slugs put into pop machines
seldom quench my thirst

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breathlessly calm lake,
but another kind of wind
wrinkles my forehead

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goose line honking north
across an empty blue screen –
stuck computer key

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1 posted 2006-06-07 08:04 PM


All 3 are well-expressed with powerful imagery; However the first senryu is my favourite - clever comparison/imagery - I relate to that one the most.

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Gaia
2 posted 2006-06-07 10:14 PM

lol, the last one made me laugh
well hello there, a photo!
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3 posted 2006-06-07 10:40 PM

i love surprise endings
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