Open Poetry #38 |
Butterfly Knots |
exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
sometimes our thoughts turn into string and they wrap around us making butterfly knots wrapping around and around and around till the purples and the blues are brought out in our skin and we become the colour palette we never dreamt we'd be we tangle and we tumble nothing but string for miles it's when we unravel that the lights get in |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
enjoyed the colorful unraveling |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
I love it when you post. ::smiles:: excellent |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well said and colorful |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
I had to read this one a few times before I got it.It made me think, and for that reason alone its a good poem. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Our hearts are colourful spiders webs..gossamer sheen of iridescence...thank you.. goldenrose. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow - absolutely love this, powerful, so clever and heartfelt....I'm saving this Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
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